The Official Writing Challenge
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03/17/17
This is a lovely poem. I can imagine it being read to a child. Just one suggestion: I think "God loves me, this I know" would fit the rhythm a little better, though I know this is a reference to the well-known song.
03/21/17
This is so sweet. I love the rhythm and the message. A happy poem for both children and adults.
03/21/17
Very cute poem. A joy to read. Hit the topic. I think the rhythm and meter were off on some of the stanzas and a few changes of words would have made it flow better. that is my opinion and certainly take it with a grain of salt as I am not an authority on poetry writing. It was a fun read though and I liked it. God bless.
05/12/17
Delightful in its childish exuberance.