The Official Writing Challenge
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03/17/17
Your beautiful story brought tears to my eyes. I was kept wondering why, until the end. Very moving and well-told.
03/17/17
The MC perspective is original and authentically written. There's a tender undertone throughout that's engaging and pulls the reader in.
03/20/17
Strong story that pulls us into the world of the little ones. You help us see through little eyes. Well done.
Amazing how you well you can see into a dearly loved little one's soul, isn't it?
03/23/17
Very descriptive and absorbing. Congratulations on your placing, Jan.
03/24/17
Congratulations Jan! A well-deserved 2nd place EC.
03/26/17
I'm getting even more wrinkles with my face all scrunched up trying not to cry.
05/03/17
O my my my. Simply put- a stunning piece of literary brilliance.