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03/18/17
Oh this was gorgeous! It dripped with nuanced meaning and imagery that left me both touched and impressed. Both the grief of the mother and the regret of the child were palpable. I really loved this.
03/21/17
This was so beautifully written. Your descriptions were so rich. Makes me want to read more.
03/22/17
What a deeply touching story. I feel as if I, somehow, mourn your grandmother's passing, too.

A great application of theme, too. I mean, that's the essence of childhood . . . the realization that there are serious things happening outside of our little paper doll world.
This touched my heart. I understand where grief lives and you did an outstanding job of taking me there. You are brilliant, my friend. Never doubt that.