The Official Writing Challenge
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03/20/17
Outstanding. Great piece. It brought tears to my eyes. Great hook and ending. The topic was nailed. It was a pure delight to read and I will pass this along to my friend. I will definitely read more of your work. It will be a teachable piece for me. You did such a great job of painting pictures of your childhood as you sifted through the attic. Thank you for making my day start out on such a touching piece of work.
03/21/17
I loved your vivid descriptions. Felt I was there.
Great job!
Remembrances told with great descriptions. I enjoyed this.
03/23/17
Descriptive pictures of beauty, innocence and finally sadness wove their way through my mind as you led me through this story. Congratulations on your well-deserved HC.
03/23/17
Descriptive pictures of beauty, innocence and finally sadness wove their way through my mind as you led me through this story. Congratulations on your well-deserved HC.
03/25/17
Congratulations on your EC for this well-told tale of childhood, full of imagery.
05/10/17
Well told step back in time.