The Official Writing Challenge
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Your title drew me in, and I enjoyed the allegorical tale.
The only thing I don't understand is why you gave away the ending at the beginning.
I love the word play you used for the spiritual parallels of spa services.
03/13/17
Interesting story.
Well done,
Blessings~
03/15/17
Great use of dialogue to tell the story. I was intrigued by the story beginning. Sounded like a beautiful place.