The Official Writing Challenge
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03/11/17
I liked this story. Working through a tough and monotonous job, but rewarded in the end. Good job.
03/15/17
Good job showing meaning and purpose behind monotonous work. I enjoyed this.
Wow this brought tears to my eyes. I loved the inner conflict. It made it feel so real. My red ink is barely pink ;) the phrase silent head phones sounds like the headphones aren't talking. Instead try silencing or noise-canceling headphones. (Note headphones is one word.) I really liked the ending. It outs a new spin on walk in my shoes or stand in my chair. Congratulations on ranking 14 overall. Happy Dance!