The Official Writing Challenge
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03/05/17
I like this.

I like your ending, but I could also see an alternate ending, where she explains why it's so special, and perhaps promises to pass it on to her one day, and perhaps have a pretend tea party with it. Perhaps you even thought of this ending too, and just chose to go with yours. Like I said, I think your ending works well too.

Nice job with this.
03/08/17
Very endearing story with well done character portrayals.
03/08/17
A beautiful story!
03/09/17
Congratulations on your 1st place finish, Ann.

Your ending had a poetic ring to it.
Congratulations for first place for a lovely story.
03/09/17
Beautiful story. It reminded me of tea time with my grandmother, and her delicate miniature tea set we used, which I now own. Congratulations on your first place win!
03/09/17
Ann, I loved this story! Congratulations on your 1st place, so well-deserved. I particularly like the very moving paragraph beginning, "Remorse is a dungeon of sorrow," and ending with "For both of us."