The Official Writing Challenge
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02/23/17
Such a testament to how subtly we can be sucked into the world's agenda and forget the One who longs to satisfy our most basic needs because He knows us intimately.

You captured the essence of it all!
02/25/17
Nice story!
02/25/17
I liked your point in the story that grief along with an enormous change in our life, can lead us to the One who is most important, and free us from the bondage of the past. Well done.
02/28/17
Very effective writing. Your control of emotion was wonderful.
Congratulations on ranking 18 overall. Happy Dance!