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Eloquently stated! I could hear a lot of my own grandmother in your words.
A great story!
I can see my grandmother's hands and recall her stories as I absorb these words. Every generation gets busy in our own ways. Thanks for bringing a world to life through the image of hands. Strong character and steady flow of thought. Blessings.
Ah, yes, the generation of busy or hungry. Wonderful story.
Congratulations on another 1st place win, Ann.

Your words have such a tone of honest authenticity. My favorite line was: Time was unhurried, a slow unwinding between sunrise and sunset, a steady turning of the seasons, like a great wheel that journeyed resolutely toward a far horizon.

I want to thank you and the other gifted writers who take time out of their busy schedules to bless Faithwriters members with their words and expertise.
Lovely story and so well written. Thank you, and congratulations!
You have written another beautiful story. I love how you describe the busy days of long ago. You create such warmth in your characters. I want to meet them. Congratulations on 1st place!
Absolutely, beautifully written. Thank you.
The next, right, hard, best thing INDEED!