The Official Writing Challenge
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Loved the ending of this!
The story kept my interest through the whole tale. Well written.
Great story!
Captivating story building energy & suspense right to the heart pounding end. Lot of truth here concerning work as an idol and its devastating consequences. Nice tight writing.
The story reminds us that there are parts of all of our lives we need to keep in check. I especially enjoyed the ending - the surprise and the suspense. The only minor thing I might point out is that Howard's first answer does not seem to fit the kid's question.
Congratulations on ranking 12 overall. Happy Dance!
I think you did a great job on this. I enjoyed the characters and it felt real.