The Official Writing Challenge
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02/09/17
Loved the ending of this!
The story kept my interest through the whole tale. Well written.
02/11/17
Great story!
02/11/17
Captivating story building energy & suspense right to the heart pounding end. Lot of truth here concerning work as an idol and its devastating consequences. Nice tight writing.
02/16/17
The story reminds us that there are parts of all of our lives we need to keep in check. I especially enjoyed the ending - the surprise and the suspense. The only minor thing I might point out is that Howard's first answer does not seem to fit the kid's question.
Congratulations on ranking 12 overall. Happy Dance!
I think you did a great job on this. I enjoyed the characters and it felt real.