The Official Writing Challenge
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Okay, now I have to use a kleenex to wipe off my keyboard. Well done on the descriptive scene, human interaction, and touching finish. A little stronger focus on the theme would make this even better.
You did a good job showing how people can say things in an insensitive way, and then giving a positive example on how to handle it. Nicely done.
This is stunning. You made me feel like I was right there watching it all unfold. Congratulations on ranking 13 overall. Happy Dance!