The Official Writing Challenge
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Honest and touching. Good work.
01/22/17
You tackled the topic in a surprising way & I couldn't stop reading. There is such authenticity to your words.
01/24/17
Wow! What a brilliant work of art. Thank you for sharing your gift. God bless
You have vividly captured the importance of the marriage bond. Excellent piece of writing.
01/26/17
Congratulations Jan!
I knew it was you when I first read your article. Wonderful piece. It brought me to tears.
God bless
Congratulations, Jan! This story is truly beautiful - I'm so glad it did well.
01/29/17
Your story captivated my heart. Towards the end it reminded me of scriptures great love story- Hosea, when the MC's spouse said he would have came after her. Yummm totally delicious ending.
01/29/17
Congratulations, Jan. This is beautiful writing, moving and believable, with a tender and positive ending.
01/31/17
Congratulations on winning 2nd place in the EC awards this week, Jan.

What a tender and heartfelt love story. It reminded me of Hosea and Kay Arthur's book, My Beloved."