The Official Writing Challenge
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11/17/16
Not an easy call to make, but a very easy story to read. Loved the unnecessary tension that snippets can produce before all the details come to light.
Your title was just enough to be misleading, and it encapsulated the story beautifully. Great job - should be a winner...
I agree with Noel. I was anticipating some mystery, and your tale did not disappoint. An excellent illustration of the telephone/gossip connection.
What a delightful story. I was trying to figure out what kind of body. I thought of an animal, but not a car. Great job. I'm not sure if you get Little House on the Prairie reruns there, but Mrs. Olsen always listened on the switchboard. I could picture someone just like her! Congratulations on ranking 9th in your level and 12 overall. Happy Dance!