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11/17/16
I like the way you have opened your MC's mind for us to explore her inner thoughts, as we share her experience of discerning whether the conversation with Kim is how God may be opening a new door. Well done.
I like the double entendre of your title. You carry the conflicts smoothly through the story, bringing the MC to a natural realization that seems neither hurried nor forced.
I was so blessed by believing hospice nurses while bidding my sister farewell, so when that aspect of her nursing work became clear, it brought a big lump to my throat.
I hope this does well.
11/22/16
Beautifully written and my heart particularly moved with this entry. I've worked in nursing homes my entire career, and so know the pace and the patients needing you as they'r about to depart especially.

God's work and calling...many blessings to you and the "door or opportunity" that the LORD clearly opened for you.

Excellent job with the topic!

God BLess~
Congratulations on ranking 10th in your level and 20 overall. Happy Dance!