The Official Writing Challenge
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11/14/16
I love this. It has the flavor of Pilgrim's Progress which is one of my favorites. Yet it is unique and teaches many lessons. So well done.
11/18/16
This is excellent! I love the journey you took me on--into this world, rich in details. Your story brings Bible truths to life. Congratulations!
12/11/16
You wove many valuable lessons throughout your wonderful tale.
It's one worth reading again to savor the nuances.