The Official Writing Challenge
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Well, that title had me reading before I started the first paragraph. Loved it! This was well written, and I believe it fit the topic well. Great job with the descriptions of emotion.
I loved this story. Every detail was just right.
Your deft word choices make this storypop, and the metaphor from which the MC learns her leson is clear, yet not overdone. I also love how her husband's actions speak volumes of love.
Congratulations, Jan! I thoroughly enjoyed this story, and I'm glad to see it did well.
Congratulations Jan on your well deserved win!
Jan, Congratulations on your well-deserved win.

The title peeked ny interest. I was not dissappointed. Your descriptions of the irritations of the offending party had me cheering for the MC until the end of the story.

The ending was brilliant.
Congratulations. Jan, on winning 3rd place. It is true that the accumulation of little things does more to destroy a marriage than the big things. I'm glad this couple didn't let things get too out of hand.
oops I left off the part about my minds eye reflecting the delight in their eyes.
Clearly, they are early in marriage. Still young but growing in wisdom. Great story, left me smiling :-)