The Official Writing Challenge
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Your excellent descriptions drew me in to this poignant story, which achieved much depth within the word limit.
A beautiful story. Well done.
LOVED this....the way your MC longed to express herself but wasn't able, but God bless the aide who didn't need her words to know her. I was a bit distracted by the constant use of "my man", thinking he was going to be someone other than her husband, but that's my only minor red ink. (And my imagination reading more than you wrote.) Truly a wonderful piece.
Cat <3
This one really put a lump in my throat.
A lovely, poignant story beautifully penned. Congratulations on you EC.
Congratulations, Marita, on winning a 4th place EC award!

Very intriguing love story.
You described a love story unlike most but high above in its intent.