The Official Writing Challenge
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10/22/16
Wow--this is truly a gripping story. This description:

"I look into Benjamin’s mouth, trying not to show my hopelessness. The dragon is there, weaving its choking web."

... is written perfection.

This is masterful skill in story-telling.

I have tremendous admiration for these selfless women, servants of God. This is very well written.
Ann, This story was gripping and compelling. The characters drew me into the sisters plight. Bless those sisters and their devotion to the sick and needy.

Congratulations on your 1st place win in EC.
10/27/16
WOW! Stunning! Congratulations.
10/27/16
Great stuff Ann! You have a unique ability and this piece is no exception. Congrats:)
10/28/16
Beautifully written, Ann. Congratulations on your win. It's very much deserved. Your writing drew me into the scene almost as though I was there amidst the suffering and the dedicated sisters.
11/30/16
My burdens pale in comparison. So thank you for this well written piece. Congratulations on your EC win.