The Official Writing Challenge
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10/14/16
I like this.

Be careful of POV shifts. You keep switching from the mom's POV to the kids and the husband, without a transition.

This was cute.
10/14/16
Ugh! Christmas decorating! Bah! :) I would be happy to put away my tree with the ornaments left on if I could figure out how to do it. I agree with Allison. There was POV shifts making it a bit confusing, but it is a fun story.