The Official Writing Challenge
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09/19/16
Wonderful read!

Blessings~
09/20/16
I am so glad Brody moved to the town of Hush! I was really feeling bad for Alyssa! And I am guessing that in a future chapter of the story Brody and Alyssa married and moved away from Hush to a far more talkative town, lest they populate the town with talkers and Hush would have to change its name! Fun read. Enjoyed.
Congratulations, Leola, on your EC for this fun parable. You raise the interesting issue of conformity an individuality, where we need to be careful to discern what is conforming to God's image versus conforming to worldly trends.
10/12/16
I enjoy a good allegory and yours was very satisfying.

Nice use of topic and congratulations on your EC placing.