The Official Writing Challenge
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Well written in rhythm and rhyme in spite of such shortness of time.
09/11/16
I really enjoyed your poem. Its rhymes, rhythms and complex wording all contribute to making it work very well indeed. Right on topic too.
I absolutely love this. Poetry isn't my favorite genre, but your piece was one of my favorites of the ones I've read thus far. Congratulations on ranking 18 overall. Happy Dance!