The Official Writing Challenge
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What the unknown can do to rational senses is readily illustrated until the unknown becomes known.

Nice writing.
This is a suspenseful story. I don't usually pay attention to titles, but this one drew me in. Be careful about the tense. Near the middle you switched to past, then back to present. You nailed the topic in a fun way. I didn't see the ending coming at all. Congratulations on ranking 15 overall. Happy Dance!