The Official Writing Challenge
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Delightful story--love the ending!
I liked the family life adventure, maybe taken from real life. The ending was natural and also real life but I didn't quite get how "Mom" got in the picture.

The writing made the day go fast.
Partners in crime with Grandma. I love it!
God bless~
Congratulations on your well deserved 1st place win Holly! The ending was a surprise that made me giggle! Loved it!
Congrats on your first place and for this lovely glimpse of real life.
Congrats on your placing for this conspiratorial tale. Well done.
Holly, Congratulations on your first place finish in EC. I had to read it several times bofore I caught the twist ending. Greta must have been the character's mother.

By your apt descriptions of the charaters, I naturally thought of two daughters playing together and getting inti michief.

Delightful read.
ahh hahaha -Good one my dear.

You crafted an utterly precious and delightful tale.

Big grin across my face.

Congratulations on your first place win.