The Official Writing Challenge
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I liked how you stirred the waters as you started but then dived right in making a big splash with the professor. The others jumped right in as they made their splash in the muddlied stew. As the class was swept along you quietly withdrew to the face of your niece.

I liked how the pace steadily moved along using the students who continually threw themselves into the mix.
09/14/16
Good play on words like "mything link" and "dug up a skull."
Good choice to use the little niece to illustrate how the way we view our world is constantly updating through technology, yet if there is a contradiction between science and the Bible, one of these has been misinterpreted. I believe as you do, that all true science confirms creation.