The Official Writing Challenge
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09/04/16
What a creative way of dealing with this topic! Who'd have thought of a mostly one-way conversation while at the dentist! I think it worked very well and was most entertaining.
09/05/16
An interesting story that kept my attention from beginning to end. After reading the final comment about "my visitor" I had to scroll back up to remind myself of the content. I was so engrossed in the hygienist's story that I forgot what got your MC to the dentist after all.
09/05/16
Witty and fast paced, hits you with a bit of depth as to the folly of the human condition , I liked it.
09/05/16
Witty and fast paced, hits you with a bit of depth as to the folly of the human condition , I liked it.
Very entertaining! I loved it from beginning to end.
Congratulations on ranking 21 overall. Happy Dance!