The Official Writing Challenge
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09/02/16
I love this! It is simple, understated, and yet each word is chosen carefully to illustrate its central concept. The last line seals it for me: great job!
This story says so very much in not so very many words. I love it1!
09/04/16
I liked your set up.
Loved your descriptions of Joan and Louie. Also liked the way you brought the story home.
Nice job.
I feel like I've been in a warm comfortable room,
with warm comfortable people who have a warm comfortable life, and there is love.

Nicely done!
A nice, sentimental touch expressing the simple connection between two people.
09/08/16
Love the imagery and subtlety throughout. Congrats on your EC.