The Official Writing Challenge
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08/14/16
Vivid and credible writing, with such contrasting results for James and for Bill. Right on topic.
08/14/16
I liked this story a lot. I especially liked how realistic both stories were. The fact that Bill's story didn't have a fairy-tale ending, but that it was a good ending anyway, was something that resonated and felt very real.

A very nice job with this story.
08/16/16
I liked this a lot. I think it will do well with the judges.