The Official Writing Challenge
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08/09/16
This sounds like it might be a true story. I was preparing myself to make a "There is no such thing as ghosts" comment but then realized the twist. A unique take on the topic. I enjoyed it.
08/11/16
Hearing music...so many directions you could go with this and then you went this way. I love how the MC misses the music. Congratulations on an awesome piece, as always, Jan. 💗
08/11/16
Congratulations Jan on 5th place Editor's Choice. Great piece of writing. I thought the story was going in a different direction, but you surprised me. That's good writing. Job well done.
08/11/16
More congratulations...on 3rd place in Masters. Happy dancing!
08/11/16
I love the detail in your work, not just this story but all your past ones too. Strangely, I guessed early on that this could turn out to be a medical issue, (I move in weird circles) but I especially like the way you rounded the story off. Congratulations on yet another EC placing.
Congratulations, Jan. This was certainly a unique take on the topic.
A wonderful story. I loved the idea of a life having a sound track and your choice of instruments -sackbut, didgeridoo,dulcimer. A very exotic sound indeed! .Congrats on the EC placement.
08/27/16
An interesting concept and perfect ending. Well done and congrats.