The Official Writing Challenge
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07/29/16
Wonderful story! Well constructed. You paint the picture of Naomi so well. A lovely surprise at the end too.
08/02/16
I think many of us can relate to railing against God for not answering our prayer the way we want.

Well told story and interesting MC.
08/04/16
What a twist! You had me thinking it was Naomi's funeral until the very last line. What a delightful surprise.

Congratulations on placing top ten.

And congratulations to Naomi, too, for realizing it's never too late to let go.
08/25/16
Your clever tale had me counting the many husbands God sent her way.

Nicely written.