The Official Writing Challenge
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07/28/16
I could feel every excruciating moment and detail. So powerfully written that this reader felt like I was the main character. Absolutely loved this!
08/02/16
Very vivid imagery. Intense. Red ink: near end, did you mean through, not though? I could feel it being painfully hot, and felt the brittleness of MCs brokenness. Exceptional writing.
08/03/16
A sermon in stirring symbolism, and a graphic reminder of the faith walk.

Well done!
08/04/16
I had a feeling I'd be sending congratulations your way. :-)
08/04/16
My eyeballs were burning as I read your masterpeice. Congratulations on your well deserved win.
08/06/16
This is a very powerful piece of writing, Theresa, and well deserving of its EC place. You've made the scenes vivid to the reader in this allegory and ended with such a message of hope. Great writing!
Well done, Theresa, I was hooked!
08/22/16
Oh but for the Refiner's fire...