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So touching. A very emotionally-driven piece.

Thank you so much for avoiding a "And then they skipped off happily together" ending. :)
This is a true to life story - no happily ever after right at the end after one meeting. Good writing.
Great job conveying Kathy's emotions. I could feel her pain. Marriage is definitely hard work, but forgiveness is always possible.
Great tie in with the title and the MC's occupation. The dialogue was believable and like the others I appreciated the hopeful but not pat ending.
This well-written story is definitely on topic--as well as emotionally packed.
Congratulations on ranking 16 overall. Happy Dance!