The Official Writing Challenge
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07/28/16
So touching. A very emotionally-driven piece.

Thank you so much for avoiding a "And then they skipped off happily together" ending. :)
07/30/16
This is a true to life story - no happily ever after right at the end after one meeting. Good writing.
07/31/16
Great job conveying Kathy's emotions. I could feel her pain. Marriage is definitely hard work, but forgiveness is always possible.
08/03/16
Great tie in with the title and the MC's occupation. The dialogue was believable and like the others I appreciated the hopeful but not pat ending.
This well-written story is definitely on topic--as well as emotionally packed.
Congratulations on ranking 16 overall. Happy Dance!