The Official Writing Challenge
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07/21/16
Very clever different gatherings. Nice writing.
07/27/16
Chilling! I like how the "planks" repeated and connected the stanzas together. Personnally, I would prefer more of a pattern. Even with free verse can have a type of flow. Good imagery.
07/27/16
Stark, powerful visions line upon line. Truth past and to come. But ending with a glorious line that messages a future choice of gatherings to be a part of! Well done!
07/28/16
Congratulations, Holly, on your 4th place win in the EC awards this week.

You painted a graphic picture with your words.
07/31/16
Congratulations, Holly, on your EC for this poem. I appreciated the wood theme carried through the stanzas and the triumphant ending. Well written.
08/22/16
Really clever way of approaching this topic. Nicely conceived and executed.