The Official Writing Challenge
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07/26/16
I enjoyed your well-written story. Great imagination and creative use of the topic word. You did a great job illustrating the Scripture passage. With your writing skills, I think you could tinker with those last two paragraphs to give the ending an even bigger impact.
07/27/16
Loved this! It could be turned into an awesome Children’s story.
07/28/16
Congratulations, Diane, on your winning 3rd place in the EC awards this week.

Your story was enthralling and filled with many gems of wisdom.
Congratulations, Diane, on your 3rd place EC for this lovely allegory! It was the only one I managed to squeeze time to read last week, andthought I had already commented, but apparently I only dreamed that. :) I'm so pleased to see this take high honors.
07/31/16
Congratulations, Diane, on your EC 3rd place for this allegoric story, so well told. A well-deserved place.
08/22/16
Oh how your spectacular tale spoke to my heart.
Each piece of the allegory was a stunning addition until the fabulous climax. One of my all time FAVs!
Thank you for this gift.