The Official Writing Challenge
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07/15/16
I loved this sweet story. Great job!
07/21/16
Congratulations, Jan, on your well deserved 1st place EC award.

Since I take a city bus to work,I could relate to the MC very well. I am also reluctant for change and like to have the seat to myself. However, I have never met my future boyfriend there.

07/21/16
Fabulous writing and so sweet. My favorite sentence was when he tried to catch the silence.
What a wonderful story - well done! It kept my attention unit the very end.
08/02/16
Fine example of opposite attractions. Congrats!
08/18/16
Great job! I liked how you had him mention she was doing her monologue and the type of sentence you wrote seemed to be a run-on. It just fit. Sorry. I don't know if I am explaining myself clearly but that is what I noticed.