The Official Writing Challenge
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Beautiful and inspiring.
I have tears in my eyes. What a delightful read. Before I let my fears keep me in the house, I used to rejoice in helping lols (which stood for Lil ole ladies long before laugh out loud). It was amazing how much joy something as simple as offering to help would bring them, not to mention me. Your story left me with an epiphany. Perhaps the reason I've felt useless lately is because I haven't been going out and putting myself in those situations. It won't be easy, but your story has shown me how much I need to do that. God bless you.
06/17/16
I love how you have taken us with your MC through the mundane street-level of supermarket shopping, before we have somehow found ourselves exiting an elevator to be confronted with views from penthouse-level. Beautifully done!!!!
Congratulations on ranking 14 overall. Happy Dance!