The Official Writing Challenge
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06/09/16
I really enjoyed this! A perfect vision of God leading one down a path they didn’t intend, but one bringing a peace and happiness the intended path would not bring! Well done!
06/13/16
I liked this very much. I have been in sales and know how that push can take over.What a sweet, happy ending. Well written.
06/14/16
I enjoyed this story very much and especially its unexpected ending. It was good to see the MC thrown off task by meeting the granddaughter. Well written.
06/16/16
Congratulations, Donna, on winning your well deserved 2nd place EC award. A perfect reminder of what our future as a Christian holds.
06/16/16
This sure puts the right perspective on the hustle and bustle of corporate life. Well done on your EC placing.
06/16/16
I really enjoyed your sweet story. What a great ending! Congratulations on your win!
06/16/16
This could have very easily reminded me of an old hymn - "Blessed Insurance(???)" - but I'm glad it didn't.
I loved how you built the tension between Josiah and his (future) grandmother in law, before ambushing us with your close.
Congratulations on your placing.
06/16/16
This story is delightfully good! The intro seemed to stumble a little, but once he met the grandmother, I was right there in the scene with them and carried along to the surprise ending. Love it! Congratulations!!!
06/17/16
Congratulations, Donna, on your 2nd place EC. I'm not surprised to see your entry amongst the winners.
06/24/16
Big grin ear to ear.