The Official Writing Challenge
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06/08/16
Yikes!

This story drew me in from the start and kept me involved. But, I'm frustrated by the ending.

No mention as to whether it is fiction or non-fiction either.

It is a well-written, touching story. Prayers and blessings if it is non-fiction.

Claire
06/14/16
Congratulations on your EC win!

This is a stirring example of working through emotions while baking. I'm hoping the MC experiences a different outcome then her mom and grandmother.

I think the word too should come at the end of the sentence.

06/14/16
Congratulations, Jennifer, on your 8th place EC award.

This is a stirring story about working through emotions while baking. I hope the MC experiences a different outcome then her mom and grandmother.

I believe the word too goes at the end of the sentence.
06/23/16
Oh my dear you wrote a convincing, beautiful and poignant story.