The Official Writing Challenge
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Amusing, but with the title and your first line I expected more of a tragedy.
I liked the descriptive language.
This is delightful. I loved the conflict and the pacing. However, as the youngest... Teehee (my siblings might agree with you). You did a great job. Congratulations on ranking 11th overall. Happy Dance!
06/14/16
Congratulations, Leola, on placing 11th place with this delightful tale.

I enjoyed the different personalities of the kittens.

I think this sentence was confusing: Because Daisy was a starter, not a finisher.