The Official Writing Challenge
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What a wonderful lesson and well-told story.

A little red-ink with the word "so" and perhaps better use of thesaurus regarding pace, etc.

Otherwise, very well done!

God Bless,
Oh what a clever story. This is full of conflicts and wisdom. I enjoyed it immensely. Congratulations on ranking 12 overall. Happy Dance!
Congratulations, Belinda, on your 12th place finish.

Your MCs showed much wisdom and discernment. God is the one who showers us with a gift or gifts to fulfill our purpose on earth.