The Official Writing Challenge
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06/08/16
What a wonderful lesson and well-told story.

A little red-ink with the word "so" and perhaps better use of thesaurus regarding pace, etc.

Otherwise, very well done!

God Bless,
Claire
Oh what a clever story. This is full of conflicts and wisdom. I enjoyed it immensely. Congratulations on ranking 12 overall. Happy Dance!
06/15/16
Congratulations, Belinda, on your 12th place finish.

Your MCs showed much wisdom and discernment. God is the one who showers us with a gift or gifts to fulfill our purpose on earth.