The Official Writing Challenge
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Great truth here, presented in an enjoyable way. Well done.
05/26/16
Great poem! I enjoyed your take on the topic in this well written poem with a great message.
This is really lovely. It flows nicely and has a great message. Congratulations on ranking 18 overall. Happy Dance!
You used an interesting structure for your poem, which communicates an important reminder.