The Official Writing Challenge
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This story tiptoed in to my heart as well. You did a nice job building suspense, leaving the reader guessing if the MC was planning mischief, then if someone was plotting against her, to the sweet ending. Of course, a kitten almost always makes a story. :)
I enjoyed this sweet romance story. I think the pacing was spot on and you did a nice job developing the characters.
What a quiet, masterfully done story. Excellent!
This story had excellent pacing with subtle twists and turns.

Congratulations, Jan! I am not at all surprised to see this here.
Congrats! I loved reading this story.
Congratulations, Jan, on your 2nd place EC award. I knew this was a winner the first time I read it. Every time I re-read it, I capture some new nuance.
Sure to be one of my favorite stories ever. I love this!
Sure to be one of my favorite stories ever. I love this!
Congratulations, Jan, on your 2nd place win. This story is very deserving of it. I enjoyed it very much. You drew me into the suspense and romance skilfully and gently. Beautifully written!
Congratulations on 2nd place EC award! Such a cleverly written, unique story and worthy of the honor.
You craft such lovely stories overflowing with meaning.

My favorites are your romantically tinged tales which tug my heartstrings and make me smile.
I love your sweet, sweet story of how life is full of surprises, especially those of the heart.