The Official Writing Challenge
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Okay, you got me. A great reminder not to jump to conclusions.
I think you did a wonderful job of developing the characters. I could relate to the MC, having gone off the rails a few times myself. Although I could predict the paragraph from the second paragraph, I still enjoyed the story. I think you did a great job of writing on topic too.
05/25/16
I saw the ending coming, but I thoroughly enjoyed the story. It was probably good for Carly that she found ways to treat herself before her birthday.
05/26/16
Well done!

Blessings~
Congratulations, Leola, on your 10th place EC!
05/26/16
Congratulations, Leola, on your 10th place EC award. Carly was an endearing MC.
06/15/16
Your detective had a solid case until truth arrived and surprised her. A nice lesson that assuming the worse usually doesn't end so well.