The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow! This is a great poem and the story is so profound. I think we can all relate to that on some level. I also thought you nailed the topic in a fresh and delightful way. Poetry isn't my favorite genre, but this is one of my favorites for sure.
What beautiful imagery, and what a story. Well told, the ending perfect. Loved every bit!
05/26/16
Excellent!

Blessings~
05/26/16
Congrats! I still have a lot to learn- but I knew right away this was a winner.
05/26/16
Congratulations, Lea, on your 1st place EC award. Your poem conveys a powerful message through its imagery.
05/26/16
I agree with Shann. Poetry isn't my favorite genre, but this is excellent.

Congratulations on your first place wins, in both Masters level and Editor's Choice.
05/26/16
Congratulations, Lea, on your win. It is well-deserved for this emotive poem with its lovely imagery and its message. I will save it as a favorite.
Congratulations on 1st place EC award! Lovely read with powerful story!
06/13/16
I love how you took this tale of the lepers to such heights.
What an extremely imaginative way to present your take on the story.

It just got better and better until its spectacular culminating lines.

Wow and wow...congratulations on your well deserved 1st place.
07/24/16
Well told story providing great imagery.