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This is a great story. You pulled me in right away and held my attention throughout. A similar thing happened to my son when he was on the board of a college faith group. It ended up making national news, but I was so proud of how my son handled the situation. Your story is a great inspiration and reminder of how Jesus is always here for us.
I'm so glad that God is control and omnipresent. Your story was very suspenseful, but I had trouble with the MC's names because their were no vowels.
Great writing!

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