The Official Writing Challenge
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Beautiful story!
05/07/16
Love the imagery and anticipation that you keep building throughout. Your setting out was just a tad crowded, but I was still able to stay 'on track' in this great little story.
05/11/16
You have a beautiful story of your childhood memories.
A bit of red ink, check the need of commas and spacing between paragraphs.
05/11/16
Well done!

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