The Official Writing Challenge
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This was a fun tale. In my opinion, it would have been more suspenseful had you begun with the paragraph about being eleven. Loved the irony at the end!
05/11/16
Interesting and fun read.

Blessings~
05/12/16
That was cute. Sow should have been sew. As in sewing the cloth bag.
05/12/16
Congrats!
Blessings~
Congratulations! This is a very fun story, well-crafted. I especially like that last line!
Congratulations, Amy, on your EC for this fun tale.
05/12/16
Congratulations, Amy, on your 3rd place EC award. I'm sure the MC won't forget that lesson.

I think you meant eat instead of each in the last paragraph.
05/12/16
I loved your cute story! Very creative. Congratulations!
05/15/16
Congratulations on 3rd Place EC and Masters!
05/19/16
What a fun reminder of the day my pre-teen boys shared a War-head sour ball with their unsuspecting mama and the ensuing laughter!