The Official Writing Challenge
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04/28/16
This of course will no doubt be a winner with the judges!

Well done...beautiful job with the topic!


Blessings~
04/29/16
What a sweet story. We cannot reach our zenith without Him.

God Bless,
Claire
04/30/16
This is the basis of a terrific children's story. Very clever and imaginative descriptions.
04/30/16
This is the basis of a terrific children's story. Very clever and imaginative descriptions.
04/30/16
This is the basis of a terrific children's story. Very clever and imaginative descriptions.
04/30/16
Sorry to labour the point, but my screen showed no response when I clicked the pad. (I hope this only appears once :-( )
05/01/16
What a great job! If I didn't know better, I would have thought I was reading an old-time fable.

Your voice in this piece is wonderful and the lesson comes across loud and clear without being preachy or repetitive.

Really nice job!
05/02/16
A delightful tale. I enjoyed reading your story. It is very creative. Good luck with the judges.
05/04/16
This one brought tears to my eyes which earns it a place in my favorites. Well done!
05/05/16
Love this. What a sweet children's story, beautifully written with a great message! Congratulations on first place.
Congratulations on 1st place! Beautiful story
Sometimes we just need to learn the hard way! Congrats on 1st place!
05/05/16
Congratulations, Linda, on your 1st place EC award!

Your story has the makings of becoming a children's book. Little Bird sounds like so many of us in life--trying to soar before we begin to fly.

The title is excellent.
05/05/16
I'm sorry I meant Diane.
05/05/16
Beautifully written, Diane. Congratulations. God bless.
05/06/16
I'll only say this once.
Congratulations on a great win. Well done.
05/06/16
Congratulations, Diane! This lovely story, so well told and with such a good message, deserved its win!
05/07/16
Congratulations on your win!
05/15/16
He lifts us up!
Thank you for your delightful take on this topic and congratulations on your EC 1st place ribbon.