The Official Writing Challenge
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Great job with this and with the topic which was spot on!

Hilarious and groan-worthy (that's a good thing). I especially love your creative rhymes.
I'm so far from being any expert on poems so take my comments as simply a reader's thoughts. I found it hard to find a rhythm to read it so I felt like I stumbled through it. Your rhyming was clever and interesting though. I especially liked "Viva Lost Wages".
A little tough to read for me....but different!
Amusing poetry. I am wondering if there's some truth in it? You are clever, nonetheless.
The poem was very funny, and the last line says it all.
This is a hoot. You had me grinning from the get-go and I groaned appropriately at the chip monks, but I also chuckled while rolling my eyes. This is the wonderful sense of humor that brightened my day.