The Official Writing Challenge
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04/22/16
Great writing here!

Well done.

Blessings~
04/24/16
Neat parallel of the downward path of deception.
Wow. I have no words but wow! Having lived in chronic pain for 27 Years, I can certainly relate to the MC. This is an outstanding story, brilliantly told and an all-time favorite.
04/28/16
Congrats!

Blessings~
Loved it! So happy it did well. Congratulations! Happy Dance!
So creative! I loved it....congrats!
Congratulations, Gary, for doing well with this chilling tale.
I'm puzzled about the theological implications, though...
04/30/16
Congratulations, Gary, on placing 3rd place this week. That story gave me goosebumps. How easy it is to fall away from the truth.
05/01/16
Congrats on your placing. Well done.
05/15/16
You did a fine job delivering this provocative piece with an unavoidable unhappy ending.