The Official Writing Challenge
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04/15/16
I am always a fan of well used repetition in a poem, you had that. I think this entry spoke from the other side of the street than the one I just read. You bring out truth some are only into their own thing. Because you used "social cat" I read it in an old jazz type voice so I don't know if I caught your rhythm properly. But I enjoyed reading you entry, Thank you.
04/16/16
My favorite line?

"What you thought was connecting
Was me bonding with myself."

It brought everything together in this fun little piece that read smoothly and clearly top to bottom.

Nice job! Thanks for sharing with the rest of us.
04/17/16
Interesting approach to the topic, well done!

Blessings~
04/21/16
I really enjoyed your poem. I enjoyed its rhythm and rhyme but also its message. Very well put and thought provoking.
04/21/16
Congrats!
God Bless~
04/21/16
Congratulations, Lea, on your 7th place EC award. I liked the P.O.V. from the cat's perspective.
04/22/16
Congratulations, Lea, on your EC place! Well deserved for this poem!
05/10/16
Nicely written and catchy. Could be a blues tune.

05/26/16
Excellent job on this poem.

Thank you for sharing it with us.